Tsumami Kanzashi Basics Tutorial

This is the kanzashi tutorial I put together for my library display. (I know it's not really needed here on dA, there are several other, better ones, but I feel like uploading it to my gallery anyway, just 'cause. Maybe someone out there doesn't know how to use a glue gun XP)

Here's the display it was made for: fav.me/d5k4uac
There are links on there because it was meant to be printed out so people could take one home, although I'm doubtful that anyone will actually take time to type all that in. XD

If nothing else, maybe one of you can tell me how to put together a better tutorial, because this one feels cluttered to me and barely fit on the page. Is there anything unnecessary on here, in your opinion? I've been trying to think of the best way to layout the pictures and text for the projects in my kanzashi book, (although I'll have more room to work with there at least.) Any suggestions on a style or tutorial layout that you find pleasant to read and could see being done in book format? I'd love to hear!

Remember to download this tutorial for a better view!

UPDATE: I've made some quick video tutorials on basic kanzashi petals, you can see them here: www.youtube.com/channel/UCiIwh…